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Banned: Compromised Account
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IP:
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Originally posted by DaIllistReBel
Ok, the breakdown:
Copy~Righted: Ur punches had potential, but either u took too long to say them, or they just died out in the end. Some of them hit pretty hard, the "stretches his barz" line was ill, nice multi and personal. Flow was ok, but sometimes, the first line had 9 syllables, then the next had 16, or somethin like that. If the flow was a little better, the punches would stand out more. Your opener was decent, your closer was solid. Pretty good drop.
Kclipz 4 Murkin: Work on your structure. The punches were there, but it was all stretched out, so some of them appeared to be hidden. Nice wordplay on the "tesstical~less", one of your best lines. Opener was kind of weak, took to long before throwin the punch. Mainly consistant with your lines, the flow was ok, off at times but there. When punches were recognized, they hit. Good drop.
My vote goes to "Kclipz 4 Murkin", both had punches but Kclipz was more consistant w/ them. Good battle. Hit the link up please, it's gettin maddd slept on. Much appreciated pz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=daillistrebel
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^^ couldnt have said it any better myself.... |