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Old 11-15-03, 10:23 PM   #16
nåmes
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From: Rose Park
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ok man it was ok battle
rap jesus had some sick shit
but you need some better wordplay and flow
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diss play had some alright stuff
but i think you came weak
u saw his verse and didnt take the opertunity to destroy him
u shoulda had some more creative shit
and u would of slaughtered him
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vote/rap jesus cuz of more complex, gave it more soul
check out my battles someone