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Old 11-16-03, 12:46 AM   #13
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heres my tryout...Its an open mic im workin on...Its not even close to bein finished and this is just a rough draft...

The Night That Mother Earth Cried...

Verse I

I awoke sane pondering my births-accepption...
Captured rain..start wondering why is Earth-in depression....
I would say something but no one wants to hear-this-boy...
Fears-I-void..Because I knew these weren't tears-of-joy..
I know theres a explanation..maybe to 'grow-trees'?...
Always a negative side..it could also be able to 'blow-leaves'...
Doubts-deadly..as animals scurry to their Plan B shelters...
Clouds-were-heavy I know its a stampede to help her...
A gun-toked-up the blur as the fun-chocked-up-the-fur...
Shes crying because maybe the sun-broke-up-with-her?...

Verse II

Neglectin-these-portions..get to acceptting-these-tokens...
People sport..'umbrellas' are just 'rejecting-her-emotions'...
I always flirt-in-love but I know theres hurt-involved...
I noticed no one can accomplsih what the earth-solved...
She gave us trees, behaved our needs, slaved our deeds...
Ingraved in our knees is a paved please to never seize...
It occoured-my-feelings are I hate tatics-that-rely-on-rain...
Poured-her-feelings but we wear jackets-to-deny-her-pain...
Crop-a-pain-in-place quietly like I lied-at-the-sane-mime...
Drops-of-rain-hit my-face I felt we cried-at-the-same-time...

(remember...*this isnt finished*)
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