at first it seems weird that a song made to represent your life, lifes song, is so short. but its kept simple and doesnt fully explain things, more of a type where you were just playing with ideas, belives, and it worked fairly well. you have to read the whole to understand it, and its a good read. i thought you could have worked on your vocab a bit. but this piece is just basic and simple, nothing really to comment on. keep rising

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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