Liba dee your pieces are still coming strong and full of emotion. This piece i adore because its simply put but has such a big effect!
i like how you compared how you felt when he first started beating you, to how you felt at the end when he beat you. and i even more enjoyed the fact that the bastard was put behind bars at the end. you did a good job showing emoitons, actions, and thoughts throu this piece, and it was a very good read. the structure was good, and nothing wrong with the vocab or flow. check you later!!!

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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