like you said at the end, this piece was mostly meant for venting, not much else other than to get emotions out and heard, and girl they were. your emotions and thoughts were clearly heard throu this piece, but maybe it should be your friend and ex that you show this too, let them see how big of asses they have been.

if you write a piece that is a pure vent, thats great, it gets the purest emotion out onto paper. but after your down, and things have cooled over a bit, pick it back up and focus on your stucture , vocab, flow, ect.

this was a good read all and all, but id like to see it taken and re-done too.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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