Lol, wow this is just plain obvious....

Aisle: first line was ok, and the first half of your second like was ok, but when you said "and break his fuckin ankle" that fucked the whole shit up for you.

A2Z: You had good flow, decent punch played but what isn't played any more? and you had a good multi twisted up with vocab and a punch, you took this.
V-A2Z

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