Thread: Aisle 5 vs A2Z
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Old 11-16-03, 02:33 PM   #17
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Originally posted by Aisle 5
Face it A2Z.. you don't stand a chance... if you live then you best be thankful
And then when he began to jump to conclusions.... he broke his fuckin ankle!

^^^First Line Was Setup Filler.....But It Didn't Work Too Well........It's Pretty Obvious That U Only Used It To Have A Logical Line That Rhymed With The 2nd Line........The Wording Of The 2nd Line Sucked....We Can Tell That Was Your Punch But U Didn't Really Setup The First Line To Be Used With The 2nd One Which Makes It Seem Out Of Nowhere & Have No Real Impact Although The Punch Was Decent.......


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Originally posted by A2Z
Aisle 5 Thinks He Has Victory...He Can't Face My Lyrical Thesis
Cuz This Cat Has No Chance...Like Missing Monopoly Pieces!
^^^First Line Was An OK Setup......No Real Probs With It.......2nd Line Was A Decent Punch With Wordplay That Won This Match For You.......



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