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Old 11-16-03, 03:00 PM   #7
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I Used To Pray
 
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i really liked this, i loved the idea, very original, good vocab and rhyme structure, 1 thing u need to work on is stay on an idea but this was peice was ill anyways
hit my peice up called change of heart and mind
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