the dog patrols here & im about 2 take oli dog 2 the dog pound
you just a retired circus intertainer like krusty the clown
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that made more sense than talking bout pigs^
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oli dont want it with me under water, cuz im known 2 blast seashells
i'm like a hotter form of fire, because i pack more heat then hell
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dont use his name 2 times, well better than comparing someone 2 a cake^
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i'm like spider man, because i sense bad rapppers
i clap wack mc's so u can just call me the oli clapper
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again with his name, decent lines though
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if u blew off my arms i still aint losing my touch
you like a little kid, to win it aint taking much
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decent, but aint is not a word? 2nd line dont make sense
y u saying that he is a little kid and its not taking him much 2 win?
think about it
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u like a plain noun, yer name dont deserve a capitol letter
i knew this kid was wack as soon as i met her
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decent, but dont use kid twice, instead of u like, say your like
u need to fix yer sructure and come much more harder
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oh yeah whats up with oli dogg using those *____*?
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vote/mista raedar for now
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look for my battles
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