nice peice it flowed nicley.. was tha other peice a part of it, coz i liked that peice better it kept me interested coz you explain your self more than explaing the situation but thats just maybe coz im a opinuated person i like to listen to peoples views. they both fit together nicley sounds like 2nd 1 is your point of view on 1st....am i typin too much ill think ill stop...good flow. keep it up
peace ~roX~

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