LmaO. . this wasnt all that great, flow was onpoint but that was basically it it, a lot of the rhyming words were one or two syllables, internals and multi's were in the very basic stages, you had nothing there to really draw me in or hold my attention, content wise this wasnt above average, i must say, it'll take a lot of practice before you become good at this type of thing. The piece was basically another 'bragging rights' effort, the oldest most played topic an open mic can be about where you try to force wordplay and brag about untrue happenings, i didnt like this at all, sorry. Im not hating, just giving my advice.

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