I hafta kinda disagree, rhyme scheme was to basic and I thought ur structure was kinda wack. u had some wordplay vocab could be upped a bit and same go's for multi's. but one thing I did like about this piece was ur hook that ur hook was tight. keep elavatin bro. peace.

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