Meh... personally I don't think incest is the best subject to be discussing and expressing unless you're trying to prove a serious point. I really didn't see the serious point to this, sorry.

Anyway, not all peices of poetry can become golden. This is just one of those offbeat peices that every writes every now and then. You'll probably end up forgetting about this. But, don't be suprised if you write another peice very similiar. The trick is to be able to let go of a peice no matter how much you like it, so later you can write one along the same lines that ends up being so much better.

That's all I can think to say.

~Shalom~

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.