yer first & 2nd lines were not understandable in a sense of mind
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dek^
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3rd and 4th no better
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dek^
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5th and 6th didnt make sense either
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dek^
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7th & 8th were yer best shit
keep doing stuff like that
its pretty hard hitting
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dek^
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yer last lines were good 2
but y have only 4 lines that make sense?
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dek^
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tags verse was kinda off the wall but made more sense
and u need to improve yer structure
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the rest of tags verse was ok but kinda weak
but do to deks wackness ima have 2 give this 2 tag
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vote/ tag fo now
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yo someone please check this out ok
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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