Ive written 4 previous responses to this piece Philo.. and to be honest.. I have no clue what Im saying. Therefore have not yet hit the Submit Reply button. But you know what? Thats what I like about your work... it makes me think, not to try and understand the poems as such, but to realise what I feel when I read them.. but they remain a mystery to me.. Hence, I keep thinking.. and I love such thought provocation.
If I were to word associate this piece, it would follow as-
Affirmation/Doubt/Acceptance/Graduation.
I must say though, this work had a real Richard Bach feel to it. One of his works in particular- Illusions.. I have no idea if you are familiar with this book, but its a worthwhile read.
As always, interesting read.. Thanks for excercising my brain

Hitting the Submit Reply button now........................