pretty nice drop man
could envision what was happening thru out...pretty dope
some wordplay in there...the rhyme scheme was the only thing perhaps lacking...need a few more internals or multies even
really enjoyed the read and it was original to me
props twizzle
I close my eyes and lean forward, wait am I ready for this?
But my feet are slipping, I'm falling for the concretes kiss

^dope line