expression will become a forgotten word,
I just thouht this line was lovely.

The piece was good. The approach you took in order makes much sense, in that sense it's a very well done piece in terms of structure. I think you needed more than comma's in there though. Question marks where necessary would bring out the narrative more.
I think you were looking for totalitarians rather than the 'ists', but no worries there.

I do think that main concepts were good and what you were saying was pretty good but it lacked a necessary elaboration. Thats the problem though.. I know how dificult this sort of thing can be. So don't think I'm downing it, I'm just suggesting from my point of view.
Past was okay but I think something was missing in that last section.
However you attack serious questions here and that should be commended.
.peace.

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