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IP:
First in frontlines for me aswell. Thanks for the extra time Brix, i just had a few problems,anyway heres my piece. 12 lines.
When Darkness Falls
burgulars attack...under the cover of darkness,
sky pitch black...allows escape with minimal fuss,
targeting the weak...old people & single women,
the futures bleek...they should never be forgivin,
punished eternally...prison is not sufficent,
dealt with sternly...why go about it different,
devestation to victims...should be paid back 10 fold,
just the beginning...think of the many crimes untold,
traumtised people...having to fight to survive,
touched by evil...now scared to go outside,
bullets showered...innocence slaughtered like mules,
these cowards...only strike When Darkness Falls
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