the picture of this was drawn out very well, written with good words, and i felt i coudl see these two men standing there thinking, it all could have taken place within less then 10 seconds, but you explained the thoughts of these men very well.

the first man reminded me of a part from the movie all quiet on the westren front when the main charater jumps a guy but doesnt kill him, just hurts him real bad, then he sees that the other side is just like him.

i liked the fact that it showed both states of mind, instead of writing one piece of one who wanted to kill, or one piece about one who didnt want to kill, this showed us both, and you did a good job putting and explaing the thoughts and emotions of both sides.

the structure was good and so was the flow, i didnt find the rhyming affected it any, it seemed real.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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