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Old 11-17-03, 07:37 PM   #3
DthsMissingAngel
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Good job. Rhyme scheme was weird. It was as if you intended on using a scheme in until the middle, then you stopped. That messed up the flow a little at the end. But dont get me wrong, it was a good drop. Seems like you really put urself into this. Overall, good job. Keep it comin. Much respect.
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