Man, I Tried Readin This With An Open Mind, But Dog, Tha Flow Was Shitty. So I Hated To Piece From That Aspect. You Didn't Keep My Attention With The Topic Drifts As Camarac Mentioned. Multi's, More Wordplay, And Better Structure Woulda Gave This Piece A Little More Incentive, But Overall, I Think You Dropped The Ball On This One Cuz, I've Seen MUCH Better From You. Work On The Structure N Even The Lines Aiight Man ?

-Formula.