it was an alright flow... it was really short, i tihnk if you would have elaborated some more on it, it would have come out better. Soem of the rhyme scheme in the beginning was a little off, but it peiced together nicely.

devestation to victims...should be paid back 10 fold,
just the beginning...think of the many crimes untold,
^^^was ur best line...

good drop overall, nice short read