Alright this collab made me feel all sappy inside......and that scares me....lol.... I really enjoyed the way you guys kept even bars throughout the piece...Really nice structure and planning on this...I can say this kinda thing happens everyday...and its great to be able to work with the opposite sex.. I really enjoyed Files opening verse...

"lost words tumble aimlessly in my minds outerspace
fading out to nothing in the dampness behind my face
breaking apart from one another, forming untrue parts
gradually tearing ones from my life who make up my heart

things were so dark so dreary everything seemed at a lost
my heart was quickly dying turning black from hates frost
then in the eternal distance one tiny spark did relight
i knew what it represented and longed for it with all my might..."

Great imagery along with deep regrets and meaning...this opened up the piece perfectly..I like the dark feel of the second part...very nice...


Existance did a great job on his first opener as well...

"every word i breathe i mean completely,
what i mean is, its you that completes me.
this feeling defeats me, not having you here,
i do just about anything to have you close and near.
lets toast to fear, our worries or our problems,
but you know me girl, i will always solve them.
you're the best thing thats happened to my existance,
so chill wit the resistance and ill chill wit the persistance."

I mean its happened to most guys who dont sit in their computer rooms all day and cyber...The real deal***Its tough to find the right words, but this guy feels trapped and secluded and the only words he can express is true honesty...makes me feel like this guy isnt so bad at all....


Overall guys great work....you both deserve a clap and maybe a award for it...hehe....one thing wheres the title did you decide its better unsaid...get back at me

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