aiight,

the only thing wrong with this was the length.
but other than that i enjoyed it.
yes once i thought for sure i knew this man
but then he jumped and left me with no guiding hand
in a new world i joined, i entered scared and unsure
but i picked up my feet, moved across hell's floor
^^^i liked these few lines^^^

some nice immagery, topic was on point.


please peep my latest drop.

aight
peace

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