yeh i agree with calisto, the title was intriguing, and made me want to read it.

i like the role play kinda thing, though i dont think i could do one of those it aint my style, so i respect, the way you pulled it off.
some nice immagery, and emotion. nice wordplay and i liked the topic.

overall nice drop

aiight, wud ya please check mine out

called
life, future, death, past
or sumfin like that

aiight peace

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