nice drop,
peeps who say u cant tell flow in text, are talkin a load of bullshit, say the shit in ur head, or out aloud. i liked the flow off this drop.

the topic was good, even though its been used before, you spoke a lotta truth.


That u cant make hiphop.. the way they try so hard,
mainstream is just a virus it was even from the start.
^^^nice line^^^

ur wordplay was simple and at times lacked complexity
e.g
With popular remakes of old songs,.. beats re-used,
the fame of others, without shame just bein abused
^^^first line^^^

but no hate, kept on topic.

aiight peace


and if u ever go in poetry forum please peep my drop in there
its called

life, future, death, past

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