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		opener:names 
closer:tie 
wordplay:names 
structure:tie 
punches:dek 
overall:dek 
 
dek only jus took this, names ur lines got two complex at times and u need to make them more simplistic. 
 
 
 
plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig!!!! 
 
 
an names, the way you vote isnt workin, it seems like you was tryiin to create a beef with me, and u were ridin born to kills dick. 
 
aaiight peace 
		
	
		
		
		
		
			
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