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Old 11-18-03, 02:46 PM   #2
menolin
\/ pissing me off!!!!
 
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aiight
ur open mics seem to be gettin longer.

aiight
some lines were simple and let the peace down
Imagine if we could go back to when we met in school...
Would I still fall for you like a fool...
Would I still go round sayin Alysha rules...
Would you still change and become so cruel...

^^^perfect example^^^

but other lines made this piece stand out,
I cant take your games and tricks anymore...
Bitch I prefered how you was before so I'm a show you the door...


this piece seemed to be wrote out of hate, and that blinded you, with a lot of abusive language.

it was an aiight drop


please peep the poetry section ans reply to my latest drop
life, future, death, past


aiight
peace
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