thank you all for readin and repling to this, even if it was a little long, it drew out a whole story.

Deacon, thanks for the long reply. we couldnt decide on a name for the piece, so we decided to leave it untitled

double-0 seven thank you for pointing out those few lines you liked, because those few i wasnt sure if i liked them all that much and wasnt sure if i wanted to put them in.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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