Aight, here's tha breakdown:

Rap jesus


Im not exagerating when i say ure lack intelligence/
Ure da dumbest MC, ur vocabulary is lame ur raps lack relavance//
^^WEAK OPENER, NO PUNCH AT ALL 2/10
To prove my point u accepted a callout which u surely not conquer/
I'll disfigure ur reputation, diminish ur rap career then u'll defenitely go bonkers//
^^WEAK PUNCH 4/10
Stupidity runs in ur family and i guessed it has reaches ur generation/
I will extinct ur kind of specie so b4 u battle me u should take in some consideration//
^^^GRAMMATICALLY INCORRECT, WEAK PUNCH 4/10
My intention in this masterpiece was to make a fake gangsta deceased/
I'll crush ur brains and put a stake through ur heart then u'll rest in peace//
^^^WEAK PUNCH 4/10
Ure a termite in this game but ima kind of wood u cant destroy/
Ur lurics are borin while mine cuz more excitement than when ppl watch playboy//
^^I'M NOT EXCITED.... 3/10

TOTAL: 17/50 (34%)


KAOS THEORY

watch me destroy your beginning and leave you wit a cracked-thesis/
rap-jesus?? fuck around and you'll get snapped-to-peices... you fudgepack-feices//
^^^RHYME SCHEME IS GOOD, NO REAL PUNCH THOUGH 4/10
fuck a peace-maker.... wit tha force of tha devel i'll beat-this-hater/
you couldnt be in lyrical fitness if u looked like tha beast-on-ur-avater//
^^DON'T RHYME, WEAK PUNCH 4/10
listen..i'll make this fly-weight... mi-grate to tha south so he can die-late/
WARNING.. my lyrics will dia-late ya crossed iris till ya eyes-straight//
^^NICE RHYME SCHEME, DECENT PUNCH 5/10
hit you in tha noggin... that'll quit ya talking.. and wish you never logged-in/
paralize ya legs so you're a dead man rolling... fuck a dead man walking//
^^^NICE, BEST PUNCH IN BATTLE 7/10
kid..you're spits couldnt be fresh... if your saliva was listerine/
face it....this bitch is so much of a herb.. his piss-is-green//
^^^OK CLOSER 5/10

TOTAL: 25/50 (50%)

WIN GOES TO KAOS

hit up the battles in my sig

peace