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Originally posted by jay yayo
yo its yayo dawg and im gunin a yard/
u got more bumbs on your face than a blind kids report card/
this nigga remind me of tupac is liked better when his gone/
im the 1 round pic but i aint labron/
ya on each others balls like pb on j otter/
this is your 1 shot 2 get me so dont bother/
when u see me run 2 your mada/
cause im out to cutta/
did i fuckin studda/
drop kick u have your face fell y melted butta/
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u need to work on keepin ya flow goin.... it got much shorter towards the end... and dont bite.. those first 2 lines were almost exactly from chrit...
overall - i think u need to elevate.. drop some links to your battles and ill check them out... then i will decide...