for never really have written a poem before, this was good.

she wrote it to get feelings out and it worked, she wrote on a topic thats done alot but was still a good read.

the intro was good, and so was the conclusion
vocab could be picked up
structure was good, but in a few places i felt like it need another beat, or one had to be gone
emotion was felt, and did a good job getting thoughts displayed.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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