some times writers block can be the best thing to happen to a poet, as weird as it seems, because ususaly when you do break out of it the results are great, like this piece.

you can see your confussion and anger, in this piece, you did a good job putting it in words, and showing your thoughts, and questions, even if they cant be answered. but remember things always get better, it all depends on what u make it.

it was well written, the structure was good and it flowed well. yet you still loved us, was a strong line in this piece, and repeating it made it that much more effective.

You kill people, you give them death,
but yet, you love us?
You forgive us of our sins and forgive those who trespass against us,
but then you kill us and make us suffer heart break and rape,
but yet, you love us?

^^ your intro was good and drew me in to this piece.
remember also that god he does give us death, but he also gives us new life, babies and children, new lives. and yes he does give us heart break and rape, but with each horrid thing it makes us stronger in a way, and just like writers block, it can give us the most beautiful things in return, and i know that may sound off the hook and crazy, but it happened to me, i was raped and heart broken in one, but i ended up with the most beautiful child, the one true person in my life for along time. so like said things even out just hold your head high. my love.

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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