true... this was real long. Thats probably why its taking me so long to respond... annnyway... that was probably the only problem. your first few longs grabbed me in.. made me want to just FiNiSH the whole poem.. so i did..
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anyway though... the imagery, topic, flow.. everything was ill... there was nothing OFF in this piece. Amazing drop.