Wow... your av is scaring me. LoL. All I see is that outta the corner of my eye when i'm reading.. anyway.. onto the crit. This poem had a nice flow to it, and a lot of imagery. Its like everything you said.. the orangejuice, the birds, splinters, corners, sharpsides.. just everything was pictured in my mind. This was an amazing piece and everything to it was picture-perfect. Nice ass piece..

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