Nice Nice Nice
this was a real good piece
i loved the flow...the two lines at the top were out of the ordinary, i really like that
i read this piece and when i was done i was like DAMN
you didnt need elaborate vocab or a nice suited structure everything fell into place
i really enjoyed this,
keep writing

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."