wow....damn
this was nice
i can relate to all of this, it's crazy
the simple-ness made this piece more effective
portrayed the emotion, the sense of being over, but still holding on to the good times
this hit deep, i find that funny
but thats neither here nor there, nice piece girl
keep writing
i'll keep reading

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."