this was a nice collab
a real good read
the title of the people talking is what drew me in to this piece, i first looked at it and noticed the length, and was like goodness, but i read on and i got completely pulled in
the picture was drawn perfectly with the words you both chose
both of your talents and way with words compliments the others and really makes this piece stand out and become great read
keep writing
i'll continue to read

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."