I find it real strange..... that everything i'm reading today on RB is hitting so close to home
girl i feel you on this piece, i know how it feels
i dont think you should try and revise it, sometimes simple and just written for the sake of getting emotion off your chest is the best
.............i'm lost for words right now
nice piece, keep writin hun
in the end it's always for the best...hopefully

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."