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Old 11-18-03, 09:40 PM   #1
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(this is a little something i wrote a while back, i havent been on in a while so i can't really keep ya'll updated, i dont know how i feel about this piece definetly not up there with the #1's but, idk, let me know what yall think)

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All eyes on me with no vision in sight
Preoccupation -> the past time
Life -> the fight

All eyes on me with no image in view
Understanding paints the picture
But comprehension remains few

~Writing’s the window to the heart and key to the soul
Recordings of the past, present, memories, secrets sold and untold
~I stand in the rain with my pad and pen
Scribbling my thoughts on the pain that cease to end
~Drenched in irony~
~The ink glides off the paper
and onto the ground, erasing my means and my stature
~Staining the streets and some flowing in the gutter
The burden of mother of the block grows stronger
Tears get heavy, more intense they pour and sputter
~I glance down at my words, my life
Loose the only refuge for my anger, my strife
~The sun creeps upon the horizon
The rain dries and on the streets new pain rot’s in
No escape
I drop my pad and walk away
With a new knowledge of being
Forgotten

All eyes on me with no vision in sight
Preoccupation -> the past time
Life -> the fight

All eyes on me with no image in view
Understanding paints the picture
But comprehension remains few
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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding
Once Again
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