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Old 11-19-03, 01:11 AM   #15
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i'll break down verse per verse...try an get a good responce here ye go....pz

Chrits Verse---

Fucka net bitch... Ya lack talent.. just good for the web cam...
Pro at hand jobs when this broke hoe feels this Pimp's back hand..
This bitch is fucked... Literally.. By half of Canada already...
Bitch had Shade... and his ghostwriters typin sweaty...
Bitch you aint ready.... Thought you could call me out like that...
Only reason you was in Regime was nude pics... And thats a fact!
God damn AIM Chats... Rooms reaction to you joining was always "Oh hell"
Here comes the only bitch ever to misspell LOL...
This tramp is finished... Not a lady... But a side-show whore...
And dont respond... Just stick to what ya good at... Kiddie porn...

This verse HitHard...i think it was a Good Dominate way to start off the diss I enjoyed the end line the most about kiddie porn that was great lol, also the personals on the web cam were funny shit lol..keep that up....

Camarac-----

Stupid slut. . think id go easy on you cause your a woman? . .
u'll be leavin w. two black eyes, & not cuz ya mascara's runnin!
the next bar's coming. . anticipate it - and nah, i aint hating . .
when i offered her a Pinkslip match - she thought i meant Decorating!
awaiting me patiently in Tag'd, your all stretched bars to win,
i keep mine Compact . . like that bag ya keep your make up in!
your a fake as shit ugly bitch, how were you expecting to win this,
when your 'verses' are more like a fucking run - on - sentence!
You'll lose...
. . not cause your a wack, not because your some lurid n00b,
but cause I used all your concepts. . about a year before you!
fucking moron, its true. . her mom and dad upped and left,
and now her only parental Figures .. are Barbie and Ken!

^^this verse was over the bar, I Found this hit hard with ill flow, i enjoyed reading it after chrits cuz of the old beef and how it showed both talents but both unique lyrical ideas...creative verse...i liked readin that 1..

Quotient

Lady Divinity ? Wait a minute who am I dissin ?
You are squat like when you fuckin go pissin
Bitch, slut, hoe, powder puff, slut, dame
I've called you..
everything in the book, oops forgot ya name.
Cunt, don't fuckin front, look, or push me
I'd hit you below the belt..
But it'd only loosen up ya pussy
13th asked me to drop on this no-name this time
I spin heads..
While everyone just looks funny at this dime
And if this isn't enough, answer back braggin
I've painted the town..
Twice, with ya head and when you was fuckin raggin.....

^^This Verse Was Unique, cause hjis styles some what different..which spiced up the text..made it interesting cuz off the differance in styles made you wonna read what styles next and diss an punches...very good verse


MM----

All i wanted was knowledge, load got too large to haul it
Lady was like Money, Cash, Hoes... but I forgot my wallet
Let's brawl shit, on the real, Just wanted U to Spread'em damn
Now It seems erybody on the block done gotcha' Webcam
But Rathen Than Me, It's My Boy -yea- So Now Its personal
Went From Couch, Crew, To The Curb & Now its hurtin u?!
Kats workin u ova like part time jobs...I hate girls like this
in a World of shit, petshop on the corner, wtf i can purchase a bitch

^^-- Punches were mad, the flow was perfect i liked the structer and vocab and multies very well done

Av-------

When ya daughter strips on a cam... on the phone with her man,
she doesn't listen when you talk... all you can do... is blame canada...
situations'll damage ya... when ya made an internet joke,
booted out of the crew... of ya boo... that's the end to that quote...
and we seen those pics before... it's a shame no one feels ya,
But no we see what's its like after shavin n' tamin gorillas...
my bad for the feelings... you broke n' hurt ya hymens virginity,
it's not easy to be a lady... when ya divine natures raped by divinity...
and you know it's bad... when Camarac said it,
this broads had more bands in her ass... than AOL cable connections...
and who's the next in... I won't even compare the drama,
of dicks in asses........................................ to Regime n' Yana's...
and you've seen me calmer... but for my dogs... hoe is second boo',
and if you're suckin right... like we've all heard... I'll be at Canada custom's soon...
there'll be no hunt for sluts... LOOK A HERE... Av sonned her,
and I'll have warm memories of her... whenever I hear the phrase cock muncher...

^^---Fuck, another dope verse, had great lines and wordplay the depth punches an shit in this were killer loved that....good drop

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Tellin cats i sent u my cock?....lol....never even sent u a pic...
there was no need...when ur mind state was at...

cshep79: whatcha thinkin about?
lilbigsisxx: i'm thinking bout rockin your dick!

u just a kid....jailbait...so i really don't blame u for callin me old...
but this bitch so stupid...she begged End if she cud Mod v/b codes
its gettin told....embarrasin u....fuck just leaving this trick bruised..
& i'll prove that u bite....hell...just open up any book from Dr.Suess
u wanted to choose...to be vindictive...and exposin ur wrath...

lilbigsisxx: i'm 1/2 black, 1/2 russian, 1/2 white

^focus on this....cuz this could be a reason u have trouble in math
bitch ass...show ur pic wit no makeup...the 1 i mistook u as a man
& i'll finally tell RB how u got in Regime...when i recieved...

Will You Accept or Decline This Persons Webcam

God damn...all ur verses are garbage...& u know i'm not wrong...
cuz why else recycle ur old junk from www.nobodysmiling.com ...
u singin the same song...ur weak flows in nuthin but soft ripples..
& i'm still pissed...cuz i said show me ur tits....& i only seen nipples
fuck ur sniffles....it gets worse...ur just another cyber whore...
& ur audio sounds like a collab wit Alvin..Simon............Theodore!...
heres more...i think its sad...that u even rendered services 2 Opey
thats why the only LOVE ull get from me is a CD from Courtney...
ur intellect lasts shortly....had better convos wit my 2 year old son
& now i understand..why a fuckin retard even called u dumb...
um...dont deny i was ur mentor...teachin adult things to u... kid...
cuz hell....i cud throw u part of my name...& u still wont get da DIS
got me pissed...i was jackin off on the phone?......thats special...
cuz U was the one Ooh'in..like a damn Herbal Essence Commercial
i tried to stay partial....to beef...but fuck it now ur gettin ur wish...
u flicked me the bird..was that the same one u fingered urself wit
pssh!...ur not on my level trick...and the reason u made elite.....
is cuz i kept my word......when u revealed to me those asscheeks..
ur weak....and a herb...but fuck it i'll enjoy leavin this L smoked...
and i admit u are funny....hence...u was just another internet joke
oh....got news for u....Shiznit isn't ur sis...and End isn't ur bro....
cuz we say fucka Nazi!.hell..ur real name is Yana Cardenas Castro
LMAO!...u come strait from the comic books...& i'm flippin the page
Todays Story Reads: Divinity Literally Fucks Knightshade....

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Originally posted by ~Lady Divinity~ Fuk you..and
i love shawn more than i ever loved you!
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focus on gettin payed...from ur body...cuz wisdom u really lack.....
honestly....if asked her for her 2 cents...i'd get 10 dollars back...
as for my ass....i sent u the pic......use it cuz i won't trip....
why?....cuz i know how u truly feel....when u say....

lilbigsisxx: damn baby i wud even eat ur shit!

should i quit?....nah....i'll just stay abusing you in each line....
coulda dropped 10...but instead...i just chose to drop Dimez...
fucka sign...i seen what u did...invite u to chat then add the guys..
but the truth is....


quote:
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Originally posted by Axe E. Um who is lilbigsisxx?
that person is on my buddy list..and i don't know why
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and why try?....spittin ur game when i'm just not feelin ur rap...
so please stop with the PM's of...

quote:
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Originally posted by ~Lady Divinity~ Oh God, i'm
sorry please i want you back
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This was the hardest verse, i liked how it was last but the most indepth and personal that made it neat, goof enternals an multies tight flow

All in all this drop had great punches and metas i would of quoted lines but i just figured verses be better but good drop
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