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Old 11-19-03, 07:04 AM   #3
Dev
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on the whole this was ok, your structure and flow could use some work and introduce some better vocab, and make your drops longer, but keep at it,,,,,aight..Pc
can you hit this plz.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92739
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