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Old 11-19-03, 11:07 AM   #6
pot1ent
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Um. .okay. .I take no hate, but heres what you didn't recognize

I've been writing with structure. .WAY WAY above yours. .the structure may have been wack as fcuk .. But when your spitting to an audience they won't give one secodn thoughts about how its presented on the page. .or if it had structure. .I got told by some dope heads that I should focus on different tempos to up my game, so I did!. .If it was wack = /. .Then howcome I don't see wordplay & metas from you like this. .huh. .

*made my point*
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