will to be honest i think this piece was tight u came real about how u feel over some chick and u was able to write it down in a rhyme and share it wit us......now unfortunately double o seven is right it was a lil simple but it did have a few lines dat made it more worth da complex piece it could be but other than that i think its a nice piece and i would like to read more of ur work to be able to critique on ur overall flow....tight work

illest line of this piece in my opinion:

"When Harry died you said you would always be there for me...
What a liein, decietful, spiteful bitch you turned out to be..."