yo on da real this is a nice piece seems like a tight freestyle if u ask me and i like da way u started

"DA UNFUCKWITABLE-LEAVING KATS IN CRITICAL-
CONDITION-CAUSE FRICTION-WITH EVERY SYLLABLE-
EMCEES ARE PITIFUL-I CAME TO RIDICULE"

real simple and to da point, but homie there is only one thing
more played out then "FO SHO" and thats "FUH SHIZZLE" dont write dat shit again makes ur whole vocab seem wea....but overall i think this was a tight piece

illest line in this piece:

"....NOBODY ROCK CASSETTES NO MORE-
YO, YOU’S A 8-TRACK RAPPER ON A QUEST FOR WAR"