Very good. It was heartfelt and complex. These two lines was my favorite. she was still always there, always cared, never judged, never held a grudge, nothing her heart couldnt budge
then one day, it was her time, she lay asleep never to wake, no more sunny days, we all cried, pain couldnt subside. It isn't often that you hear an Emcee talk about loving a girl. This was a refreshing change of pace. One thing you need to work on is tripped and drip. I don't think they flow together that well. Keep at it!