yo this piece makes me want to smoke a blunt......real nice flow though i thought it was poetic and will written but i think u were high when u wrote this i just got this feeling u were but anyway tight work on it but one thing though come wit a tighter vocab next time it might make it a lil deeper than what it is but overall i liked it...........now im gonna go smoke me one!!

illest line in this piece:

"Times passin me by as im gettin in through my passenger side
Once Im feelin the blunt Im passin the vibe to darken the red in my passenger's eyes"