Nice drop Shi, I like the complexity in contrast to the structure. Strong vocab lose ryhming scheme, this is not an easy drop to pull off, yet you did well. I know of few RB poets who could get away with such a thing, one who most comes to mind is Content. He is very good at it, and I think you just added your self to that list. Don't confine your self to the typical detail and technicalites when it comes to your writing, there is no true measure of Art, other than the impressions left on the minds of it's audience.

Now the subject matter was well thought out, and you did a hell of a job at making a statment if that was your intent. I oftne ask myself why does art have to be tragic or morbid in nature in order to be consider art to the elites. Well I know it's in our human nature to be fasicinated by such, but is it really a measure of art. I think one can find art in many ways and mediums. If I read or view something that makes me feel anything, I consider it an art form.

Respect
~Bounce~

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