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Old 11-19-03, 05:34 PM   #5
bouncedoggydog
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Once again let's throw out all the technical details that go into a poem. I thought this was just a random pen to paper on a whim type drop. Meaning you did not sit down and contomplate a structure or scheme, it's reads more like you just let your pen walk onto the page until it was done. I really enjoy that kind of work, I myself am prone to use that style, just letting my pen flow free without editing or making corrections for structure or ryhme scheme. I feel these type of drops reflect the fluidness of a poets thoughts. Anyone can over compensate for structure or use a percise ryhme scehme, match stanza' to syllabols, but a real test is to just let your pen free style so to speak. If this is the case here, you did a good job, I enjoyed reading it.


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